Divine Judgement

Hi!

Today, it’s time for yet another one of my ultra short stories namely micro/flash fiction, of which I have written three previously. Find the link to those right below!

The walk

Crossroads

Coming full circle

Now let’s get rolling with our day’s work!

Divine Judgement

A cream coloured, parked Mercedes Benz public transport vehicle. Taxi car.

The bird’s dropping on the bonnet of his Mercedes couldn’t help but bring an expression of mild amusement on his face. For it bore testimony to the fact that His judgement befell equally on everyone. It really didn’t matter whether one owned a modest minivan or an extravagant Ferrari. The rules were the same.

Bird’s shit remained bird’s shit.

Word Count:- 59

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25 Comments Add yours

  1. Tom Burton says:

    Lovely short story, with a great message! 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks a lot, Tom! 😀

      Like

  2. Shelley says:

    LOL – that is so very true! I love it!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thank you so much Shelley! 😀

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Shelley says:

        You’re welcome!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. floatinggold says:

    That was too funny/ A great message.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks a lot! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  4. LOL . No reason to sugar coat it.

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    1. The Pensieve says:

      I guess😅 Honestly I have just tried to convey the story in as few yet as impactful a way as possible…

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      1. You did it successfully.

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        1. The Pensieve says:

          Thanks a lot! 😊

          Liked by 1 person

  5. Rashi Singh says:

    The last line.😂
    On a serious note, great message.👏

    Liked by 1 person

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks again sis! 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Winnie says:

    Wonderful story! I love the message it conveyed. 😊

    Liked by 2 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thank you Winnie! 😊

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Winnie says:

        You’re welcome!

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  7. Anand Bose says:

    Very cute irony Anand Bose from Kerala

    Liked by 2 people

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Thanks a lot for your feedback Anand!😊

      Liked by 1 person

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    1. The Pensieve says:

      I am really glad to hear that. Thank you! 😊

      Like

  9. PatrickClelp says:

    Appreciate it. Ample content.

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  10. PatrickClelp says:

    Thanks a lot, Numerous posts!

    Like

    1. The Pensieve says:

      Nice of you to say that, pal!✌️

      Like

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